Memoir:
My first impression of Florida was that is was HOT!!! REAL HOT!!! I hated it, I was used to the Minnesotan weather. Stifling hot, in fact, I thought I was going to die. We got to the thankfully air conditioned hotel and unpacked and ate out, getting a good nights sleep for our busy day tomorrow. And the rest of my busy week for that matter.
My week was really eventful, going to two different, amazing and intense water parks. 3 different Amusement parks, and a bunch of shows, including Cirque de Soleil. My favorite was the Aquatica water park, where they had this slide where you went underwater into a pool with dolphins!!! Even though it was a slow ride, it was pretty exhilarating!!! I was pretty worn out by the time we got back on the plane no our way to Minnesota. I was tanned, sun burnt, and full of tons of stories to tell my friends.
I liked how you told us alot. The only thing that I would want to change is to be more descriptive in your acticities. Otherwise great job!
ReplyDeleteHow did you feel abotu being in florida? I like it, just add a bit more of how you were feeling.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! Especially on your vocabulary! I agree with you, Florida is really hot compared to Minnesota weather! I'd say the only mistake I caught was that you misplaced some of the commas. Other than that though, it was terrific! (:
ReplyDeleteGood job Caysi but could you discribe a little more?
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